CELPIP Writing Sample Answers
Full sample responses for both writing tasks — the email (Task 1) and the survey response (Task 2) — annotated with exactly what earns a high band and what holds an answer at CLB 5–6.
How CELPIP Writing is scored
CELPIP-General Writing has two tasks, each worth an equal share of your Writing score. You get roughly 53–60 minutes total. Both tasks are marked on four dimensions: Content & Coherence (did you cover every required point clearly?), Vocabulary (range and precision), Readability (organization, linking, paragraphing), and Task Fulfillment (tone and completeness). Aim for 150–200 words per task.
The single biggest score-killer is not grammar — it's missing a required bullet point. Read the prompt twice and make sure every instruction is answered before you polish wording. New to the exam? Start with What is CELPIP?
Task 1 — Writing an Email (CLB 9 sample)
- All three points covered: thanks, a clear explanation, and a concrete offer to reciprocate.
- Natural, appropriate tone: warm but professional — right for a coworker.
- Varied structure & precise vocabulary: "at such short notice," "took a weight off my mind," "don't take the favour lightly."
- Clean paragraphing with a greeting, body, and sign-off — easy to read.
The same task at CLB 5–6 — and why it scores lower
- Recurring grammar errors: "thank you for you help," "I can not come," "very kind from you" — small but repeated, they cap the band.
- Too short and thin: under 60 words; the explanation and the offer are barely developed.
- Basic vocabulary: "very happy," "very kind," "very much" — no range.
- Covers the points, so it isn't a fail — but recurring errors + limited development is textbook 5–6, not 7+.
Task 2 — Responding to a Survey (CLB 9 sample)
- Clear position stated up front and restated at the end — easy for a rater to follow.
- Two developed reasons with real support, not just assertions ("higher foot traffic, because people linger…").
- Acknowledges the other side ("I understand the concern…") then rebuts it — a strong-band move.
- Cohesion: "First… Second… For these reasons" guides the reader; vocabulary is precise ("absorb the traffic," "linger," "prosperous").
A repeatable structure for both tasks
You don't need a new plan for every prompt. These templates fit almost any CELPIP writing task:
- Task 1 (email): greeting → reason you're writing → point 1 → point 2 → point 3 (each prompt bullet becomes a short paragraph or a clear sentence) → friendly close.
- Task 2 (survey): state your choice → reason 1 with support → reason 2 with support → acknowledge & rebut the other side → restate your choice.
Then spend your last 3–4 minutes proofreading for the errors that most often repeat: subject–verb agreement, articles (a/the), and verb tense.
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